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GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 14:54, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]


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lede
  • Should it be: "a tropical depression formed, named Kathleen"? - point at which storm was named.
background
Meteorological history
other
  • common words like "cotton", "lettuce" and "hay" shouldn't be linked.
  • why is "one and 160 year event." linked to 100-year flood?
  • "Total damage was $160 million, making Kathleen one of the costliest tropical storms in state history" - is this still true in 2012?
  • yea. Have no source to back up, but according to my records, Kathleen is 2nd. YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "flash flood watches were issued throughout Southern California, including the desert and mountains.[17] Flash flood warnings were also issued for parts of the state," - needs rewording as "parts of the state" is vague after previously specifying "Southern California".
  • Reworded slightly. Any better? YE Pacific Hurricane 23:02, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • why are some states linked and not others?
  • I made some copy edits so please revert any errors.[1]

MathewTownsend (talk) 20:29, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:02, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
    B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Provides references to all sources:
    B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Main aspects are addressed:
    B. Remains focused:
  4. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: