Talk:Mahmoud Kahraba/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:55, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

• I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 21:55, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

• I know it is in the lead, but we should still have a BLP-compliant citation after "was terminated with Luzern citing inappropriate behaviour."
• "an option to make the deal permanent, in August 2013." Who had that option? Him? Luzern?
• FC Zürich is the article title, with the diacritic.
• Similarly, Grasshopper Club Zürich
• "loan feal with" typo.
• "he squad,[16] He " Either decapitalise "He" or turn that comma into a period.
• "substitute infor place of"
• "2–2 fraw with"
• " squad for their UEFA Champions League " Should likely use the link to whichever UEFA CL this was, rather than to the general article.
• "agreeing a transfer to" Agreeing to a transfer to
• Wikilink Egyptian Pounds, better yet if you can convert it into hard currency.
• "was fined 500,00 Egyptian pounds" Either that comma is in the wrong place, or we need an extra 0.
• "Atletico" Make sure you're consistent with the diacritics on the e
• "requires surgery." Requires? Future tense?
• "defeats to Uruguay, Russia Saudi Arabia" Needs an and
• Ref 2 needs more details and formatting.
• Ref 51 needs an access date.

• Bunch of quirky nitpicks, really that's all. Courcelles (talk) 22:14, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Thanks for another review. I've addressed all of the issues above, let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 06:50, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

• Looks good, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 15:11, 28 July 2018 (UTC)