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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC) Since the Miami Heat lost, I will be reviewing this article. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "The 1899 Carrabelle hurricane caused significant damage in Dominican Republic and the Florida Panhandle. The second tropical cyclone and second hurricane of the annual season, " what kind of season? Spring? Also, missing a "the" after the first "in". YE Pacific Hurricane 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hint: it has nothing to do with the Heat vs. Spurs game. :P 5 score and 14 years ago, a hurricane struck northwestern Florida. :P Actually, another source I have says that only 9 houses remained.--12george1 (talk) 03:57, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Many boats at the harbor and the wharfs in Lanark were wrecked. Large portions of stores and pavilions in the city were damaged. " have you ever heard of a semicolon? If so, combine these sentences with such feature. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • " Early on August 2, it weakened to a tropical storm and then a tropical depression several hours later, shortly before dissipating over southern Alabama.[2]" separate these two sentences. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The city of Carrabelle was devastated, with only nine houses remaining." to "The city of Carrabelle was devastated as only nine houses in the city remained." YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "One fatality occurred in Carrabelle when a house collapsed on a woman, Mary Williams; numerous other people in the area sustained injuries.[4] " we don't usually mention names of people affected by hurricanes unless notable (like Tim Duncan) :P YE Pacific Hurricane 03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Don't mention ever ship names when they are 15 of then.