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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 16:20, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Crops in the areas effected saw large losses, particularly the rice crop." Grammar error, "effected" ---> "affected"
 Done - Always gets me, thanks. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "noted at around this time, later renalysis was conducted on the system," - Typo, "renalysis" ---> "reanalysis"
 Done - Not paying attention to the red-squiggly spell check lines. :D TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The cumulation of the hurricane's affects resulted in the destruction of" - Did you mean "accumulation", instead of "cumulation"?
 Done - Not sure why I used cumulation, changed. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Matagorda and San Antonio Bays decredased by" - Typo, "decredased" to "decreased"
 Done - Fixed. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "There, damage was limited to oil derricks and other light strucutres." - Another typo, "strucutres" ---> "structures"
 Done - Typos everywhere! TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to damage 70 of the 75 planes at the local" - What's with the extra space there?
 Done - Was not aware of the extra space after the non-breaking, thanks. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Changed appropriately to "Alamo Field," the name of the airport at the time. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is the buttons template not at the bottom of the page? Don't worry, I would ask you to change them, since this isn't an FA. :P
 Done - Was also not aware that this template existed, and you would or wouldn't ask me? TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Thanks. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 21:16, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]