Talk:2009 ACC Championship Game/GA1
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Reviewer: Nikki♥311 19:37, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
I should have my review up sometime on Sunday. Nikki♥311 05:23, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
- "From the start of the game, the 2009 ACC championship was an offensive showcase." - Per WP:PEA, this should be taken out. Don't use peacock terms like "showcase"...just report the facts.
- Some of the teams are overlinked. For example, Virginia Tech in linked approximately three times in the body of the article.
- "The Duke victory raised Georgia Tech to 10 wins, the school's first time at that mark since 1990, and the Yellow Jackets were ranked No. 7, their highest position in the national polls since that year." - needs a ref
- Make sure coaches and players are wikilinked.
- In the Clemson section, there are schools that need to be wikilinked.
- Per WP:JARGON, football terms should be wikilinked so those unfamiliar with the game will be able to figure out what the terms mean. Examples: conversion, first down, sack, etc
Overall this article doesn't need much work. Great job. I'll give seven days for improvements. Nikki♥311 19:42, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I went ahead and fixed all the issues. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 13:54, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
- Awesome. I'll look it over tonight after work. Nikki♥311 19:56, 2 April 2011 (UTC)
- Changes look good. The article meets the Good Article criteria. Pass. Nikki♥311 18:13, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
- Awesome. I'll look it over tonight after work. Nikki♥311 19:56, 2 April 2011 (UTC)