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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Bushranger (talk · contribs) 19:28, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Overall nice work here. Just has a few quibbles that need working on.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Nice work here. Do have a few quibbles, however. To wit:
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Article is fully and factually referenced, with citations throughout and free of WP:OR. I do have a quibble with the citation style used though, as it may be unclear to some viewers. I'd suggest using the following for certain sites, with the format work=/publisher=: Rotoworld.com = Rotoworld/NBC Sports; NASCAR.Com = NASCAR.com/Turner Sports; Jayski.com = Jayski's Silly Season Site/ESPN; racing-reference.info = Racing=Reference/USA Today Sports Media Group; MotorRacingNetwork.com = Motor Racing Network/International Speedway Corporation. Also, I'm not sure Auto Racing Daily is universally recognised as a reliable source, would it be possible to perhaps cite a newspaper report instead, like The Charlotte Observer's?
     Done... I had to change the quotes while I was at it... -- Nascar1996(TalkContribs) 20:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Article covers the event well and broadly without needless digression.
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
    Article is neutral.
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Images are appropriate, appropriately licensed, and captioned.
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Very close, just needs attention to the issues above; placed on hold until then. - The Bushranger One ping only 19:28, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Looks like I have fixed all of the problems you have expressed. -- Nascar1996(TalkContribs) 20:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    And pass, good work! - The Bushranger One ping only 21:33, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]