Talk:2018 Sunrisers Hyderabad season/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:37, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will read this article and give comments soon. MWright96 (talk) 13:37, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

General

SunRisers should be refered to as "The SunRisers" wvery time they are mentioned and do the same with the other teams mentioned in the article

Background

"Chennai Super Kings and Rajasthan Royals were re-included in the 2018 season" - The Chennai Super Kings and the Rajasthan Royals
"The IPL Governing Council also announced that a maximum of five players can be retained by each IPL team of which a maximum of three can be selected through retention in the lead up to the auction," - of which no more than three can be selected through retention
"and a maximum of three through right-to-match cards during the auction." - the acroynms of right-to-match should be placed in this section of text rather than in the retenting sub-section

" "The other restrictions on player retention were: a maximum of three capped Indian players can be retained, and only two overseas and two uncapped Indian players can be retained." - kept to avoid reptition

Retention

"They went into 2018 IPL auction" - missing "the" between "into" and "2018"

Player auction

"They went all guns for getting Manish Pandey - "all guns" is informal and unencyclopedic
"They later added Carlos Brathwaite and Yusuf Pathan from capped all-rounders list" - missing "the" between "from" and "capped"
"They really came to life during the auction" - "came to life" is not appropriate for Wikipedia
"and also getting services" - add the word "the" that should be inbetween "getting" and "services"

Offseason

"On 28 March, David Warner resigned as the captain of SunRisers Hyderabad in the aftermath of ball-tampering scandal" - of a ball-tampering scandal
"The BCCI later announced on the same day" - spell out BCCI since its not mentioned later in the article
"following one-year ban imposed on them by Cricket Australia." - this should read as after Cricket Australia imposed a one-year ban on them.
"On the following day, SunRisers Hyderabad announced Kane Williamson as captain and Bhuvneshwar Kumar as vice-captain for the season." - rewrite to The following day, SunRisers Hyderabad announced Kane Williams would serve as captain]] and Bhuvneshwar Kumar would be vice-season for the season.
"Later, they announced Alex Hales as replacement for Warner for the season." - changed this to Later, the announced Alex Hales as Warner's replacement for the season.
"On the squad available for this season, coach Tom Moody said" - a comma is needed at the end of this sentence

April

"Williamson, the new captain of SunRisers, elected to field first after winning toss" - reword to Williamson, the SunRisers' new captain, elected to field first after winning the toss
"with Williamson providing stable stand on the other end" - providing a stable stand
"Sandeep Sharma was handed debut for SunRisers, replacing the injured Bhuvneshwar, and started troubling Mumbai Indians batsmen" - Sandeep Sharma was handed his debut for the SunRisers, replacing the injured Bhuyneshwar, and started troubling the Mumbai Indians batsmen
"but it was Stanlake who drew the first blood, dismissing Rohit Sharma. " - but it was Stanlake who succeeded in dismissing Rohit Sharma
"On 14 April, SunRisers completed a hat-trick of wins in the season with a five-wicket win over Kolkata Knight Riders." - The SunRisers completed a hat-trick of wins in the season with a five-wicket victory over the Kolkata Knight Riders on 14 April.
"Saha provided an explosive start" - change "explosive start" to something more formal
"Later, Gayle broke shackles" - Later, Gayle stopped his limits
"losing their openers but local boy, Ambati Rayudu, used his familiarity of the ground to beat conditions" - losing their openers but local player, Ambati Rayudu, used his familiarity of the ground to beat the conditions
"Pandey reached 'his 50 while building another crucial partnership with" - his 50 what exactly?

May

"On 7 May, SunRisers equaled their best streak of five consecutive wins defeating Royal Challengers Bangalore at home by 5 runs. " - by defeating
"Royal Challengers came back strongly at the death" - not encyclopedic wording
"Royal Challengers started the chase strongly with cameo from Parthiv Patel" - with a cameo from Parthiv Patel and link Cameo to Glossary of cricket terms#C
"and become first team to qualify for the playoffs." - {{xt|became the first team to qualify for the playoffs.}
"Though Sunrisers lost Hales early," - SunRisers

Playoffs

"However, a late innings blitz" - attack

References

Would be too long to list every one, but make sure that the author(s) are included in all the sources that include them
Reference 2 needs the newspaper that published it, the date it was published and the date you accessed it
References 18 and 19 are missing the websites that published them
For the Twitter references (References 12, 14 and 15), see Template:Cite tweet on how they should be formatted
Ensure the IPL reference do not all have capitalized wording in their sources
The ESPNCricInfo sources need to be consistent in how they are presented; personally i'd go with ESPNCricInfo instead of a mixture of espncricinfo and espncricinfo.com

That is all I have found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:51, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:37, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]