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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Valereee (talk20:37, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Abolitionist Place street sign in Downtown Brooklyn
Abolitionist Place street sign in Downtown Brooklyn

Created by Rhododendrites (talk). Self-nominated at 00:48, 18 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • @Ritchie333 and Epicgenius: What kind of image are you thinking would be ideal? Something older? Again, there are photos of what 227 Duffield looks like today in the category linked above. There is unfortunately a tree directly in front and cars in between so those are the best I could manage. A photo of the street from the end wasn't particularly interesting because the only things visible are new buildings and cars. This one shows how the buildings on either side of 227 have been demolished (and in one case rebuilt), but it wasn't IMO as eyecatching at small size, hence why I used the street sign. Also, yeah, I feel lucky to have found a landmark in NYC to write about before EG got there first. :) — Rhododendrites talk \\ 16:52, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Abolitionist Place/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:55, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "stop on the Underground Railroad" this needs a little context.
    • I added some context for what the underground railroad is in the background section, and added a source at the end of the paragraph including "stop on the Underground Railroad". If that's not what you meant, could you say more?
  • "leading community" the local community?
    • Addressed this.
  • "is in development as of July 2021." September now.
    • Actually should've said June 2021, since that's when the last source was published that talks about it. It is indeed still in development now, but that's my OR.
  • "with southern states " link? Isn't this normally capitalised, at least "Southern states"?
    • Had to check this. Looks like Wikipedia is pretty inconsistent on the matter, but the best advice I could find recommended capitalizing when it's a group of states rather than state in a particular direction. Done.
  • "the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850" of 1850 goes in the link.
    • Done.
  • "still largely done in secret" conducted rather than "done".
    • Done. Conducted.
  • " c. 1847-50" en-dash and full year, i.e. 1847–1850 unless it's just the first part which is circa, in which case it's c. 1847 – 1850.
    • Done.
  • First para of "227 Duffield Street" is unref.
    • Done.
  • "1786 – 1862" no spaces. There are more of these.
    • Done.
  • " Park.[3][1][10] " order.
    • Done.
  • "Railroad.[8][11][3] The" ditto.
    • Done.
  • "Professional Archaeologists of New York City (PANYC)" you never use the abbreviation so why bother?
    • Done.
  • "publicization" is this really "publication"?
    • Done.
  • "use eminent domain to seize" link eminent domain here.
    • Done.
  • "name: Abolitionist Place.[16][6]" order, and replace the colon with "of" to reduce the "DRAMA".
    • Sounds fun. I've just learned that AWB disabled auto-ordering refs (one of the only reasons I fire it up) because of "drama"... Done.
  • "sold 50% of the property" half?
    • I suppose 50% feels more precise, but I can't really articulate why. Done.
  • "mixed-use building in its place.[17][18][14]" order, and link mixed use?
    • Done.
  • "president Eric Adams" doesn't need disambiguation.
    • Done.
  • "designation.[24][3]" order.
    • Done.
  • "House.[2][25][5] The" order.
    • Done.
  • "a 15,000 square-foot park" convert.
    • Done.
  • " 1.15 acre space" convert.
    • Done.
  • Suggest you use the {{reflist}} template for consistency across Wikipedia.
    • No strong opinion here. Visual Editor throws the old fashioned one in there. Done.

That's all I have on a quick pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:48, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review! I think I've addressed nearly everything here. A couple follow-up notes (mainly towards the top). — Rhododendrites talk \\ 05:30, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Can I suggest "Southern states"? It makes sense to capitalize 'Southern' as it's referring to a specific geographical entity and not the general direction. The whole phrase together is not commonly a proper noun. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 13:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fine by me. Done. — Rhododendrites talk \\ 13:46, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]