Talk:All Night Long (Ami Suzuki song)
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:45, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 21:45, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Needs an alt
- I prefer a flatlist rather than an hlist, but it's okay, you don't have to change it
Lead
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- Change 'capitalized' to 'stylized'
- Change 'song writer' to 'songwriter'
- Delete 'the being her single' and '(1998)' in the sentence discussing her previous collaborations with Komuro
- Delete the CD cover sleeve description; you can leave it as the alt instead, if you'd prefer
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Delete 'her native'
- Delete 'and two' from the sentence discussing how it was her highest charting single
- Add 'becoming' to the beginning of 'Suzuki's seventh best selling single in that region
Paragraph 3
[edit]- Bowling rinks are more commonly referred to as bowling alleys; I think you should switch 'rink' to 'alley'
- Remove 'herself' from '"All Night Long" and Suzuki [herself]...'
- Add respectfully to the end of the sentence
Background and release
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- 'had written, produced, composed and arranged' should switch tenses to 'wrote, produced, composed, and arranged'
- Add 'the' before 'English language'
- You can remove the sentence 'It is Suzuki's third single to be handled by Komuro, following "Love the Island" and "Alone in My Room" because the information is redundant. If the sources for that sentence are included elsewhere, move the sources
Paragraph 2
[edit]- The sentence discussing "Free Free" and "Single Music Maker" isn't needed
Composition
[edit]- The sentence that starts with 'Throughout the choruses' needs to be reworded; it doesn't make much sense to me
- You don't have to list the other seven songs on Ami Selection
- Change 're-produced' to 're-producing'
Reception
[edit]- Remove the reception section and delete an equal sign from the beginning and end of both 'critical response' and 'commercial performance'
Critical response
[edit]- Change 'favourable' to 'favorable'
- Again, remove 'herself' from the awards sentence and add 'respectively' towards the end, similarly to what you'll likely do in paragraph 3 of the lead
Commercial performance
[edit]- Delete the comma is 'It spent three weeks in the top ten, and a total of fifteen weeks in the top 100'
- Insert 'number' before '77'
- Flip 'Japanese' and 'Annual' around
Music video and promotional activities
[edit]- Separate into two sections: 'Music video' and 'Promotion'
Paragraph 1
[edit]- Switch to 'alley' again
- You could detail the video further if possible, even adding a photo would be a nice addition
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Reword the first sentence and make sure singular and plural statement are separated
- Change 'Japan and it achieved large' to 'Japan, were it received significant'
- Change the colon in 'Suzuki's concert tours: these include her' to a semi-colon
- Capitalized the 't' in '29th Anniversary Tour'
- Reword the 29th anniversary section since you can only have one 29th birthday
- Change the 'and' in 'and "All Night Long" was performed in the middle section' to a 'where'
Track listing
[edit]- Change section title to 'Track listings'
Personnel
[edit]Nothing to add here :)
Charts and sales
[edit]Looks good to me as well
Release history
[edit]Also, looks good
Footnotes
[edit]- Rename as 'References'
Notes
[edit]- Remove this section entirely
References
[edit]- Add access dates to any sources that are missing one
- [20] - Unlink Count Down TV
- [29] - Unlink Avex Trax
- [31-38] - Unlink iTunes store
End of GA Review:
[edit]Overall, another good Ami Suzuki article, but some changes and modifications need to be made. I'm gonna put it on hold until the nominator can review them; thanks, Carbrera (talk) 00:20, 6 March 2016 (UTC).
- Hello @Carbrera: My sincere apologies; I currently have a lot of school work and other endeavours to be sorted out. This page will DEFINATELY be finished either tonight or tomorrow, so please hold on a bit more. Cheers CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 22:36, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
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