Talk:Anglo-Italian Cup/GA1

GA Review

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Will start the review tomorrow. Pmlineditor  Talk 16:33, 7 September 2009 (UTC)

Lead

• 3 items? Expand this please. And we need sources for it.
• Why is "Alitalia Challenge Cup", "Talbot Challenge Cup" and "Gigi Peronace Memorial" bolded?
• Club's founder needs article.

History

• "The Football League Cup was changed in 1967 so the winner would be awarded a place in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup." - How was it changed?
• However, when Queens Park Rangers won the final that year they were in the Third Division and, at that time, UEFA did not allow third-tier teams to compete in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup - needs punctuations

Fix these first. I'll check the rest and post tomorrow (In case I forget, ping me on my talk page). The article looks good to me; it is likely that it'll pass. :) Pmlineditor  Talk 15:38, 13 September 2009 (UTC)

I haven't got much time today; will finish tomorrow. Pmlineditor  Talk 15:44, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Grouped replies

Lead

• I don't understand what you mean by "3 items?". However per Wikipedia:Lead_section#Length one paragraph is suitable for the lead as this article's length (~6200 characters) is well under 15000 characters. I'll try and add in another sentence perhaps. Additionally, inline citations in lead are not required per WP:LEADCITE as it is all sourced in the body of the article.

• Not the lead; the infobox. Pmlineditor  Talk 15:38, 13 September 2009 (UTC)

• An infobox is part of the lead, and as such is covered under leadcite. As for the "three items" part, the infobox was the only part of this article that I didn't add. Tell me if you want it removed completely. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:07, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
• ChrisTheDude has expanded the infobox so hopefully it is fine now. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

• These are it's other names. From WP:BOLDTITLE: If the subject of the page has a common abbreviation or more than one name, the abbreviation (in parentheses) and each additional name should be in boldface on its first appearance.
• That has never been a requirement, and isn't in FAs either. However, I'll endeavour to create one, but it likely won't be until the weekend.

An article on this person is coming along in my sandbox, however I rather busy at the moment and probably won't get it into mainspace this week. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

 Gigi Peronace

History

• It was changed so that "the winner would be awarded a place in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup" because before 1967 they didn't, I'll try and clarify this.

Done, Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

• Done, Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:26, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

• I find the fact that the text size is only 17K a bit concerning. Can you possibly add 1-2K text somewhere? Regards, Pmlineditor  Talk 15:40, 13 September 2009 (UTC)

• Checking the page, these are the main issues I find. They should be easy to fix, so ping me when you have done them. I'll give a look and will probably promote it. Pmlineditor  Talk 15:58, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

Checklist

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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yes

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   Well, no images here, but they're probably not needed.

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Pmlineditor  Talk 17:06, 16 September 2009 (UTC)