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Reviewer: TheJoebro64 (talk · contribs) 12:17, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Still waiting for Archie Meets the Hellblazer, but in the meantime I'll review this. Expect comments within a few days. JOEBRO64 12:17, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox/lead
  • Listing both humor and comedy in the infobox seems redundant, I'd pick one or the other
  • Punisher mistakes all-American teenager Archie Andrews—"all-American" sort of sounds editorialized and colloquial IMO. If you disagree you don't need to do anything about this, but I'd remove it.
    • Looking back at this, I don't think this is an issue actually.
  • Although the announcement was initially believed to be a joke—who believed the announcement was a joke?
Publication history
  • Archie Andrews first appeared as a backup feature in the adventure comic Pep Comics #22, published by MLJ Magazines in December 1941. The all-American teenager...—I think WP:ELEVAR might apply here. I'd change "The all-American teenager" to just "Archie" in the second sentence and relocate "The all-American teenager" the first sentence (I'm thinking something like "The all-American teenager Archie Andrews...")
  • Believe it or not, The Amazing Spider-Man #129 has its own article. I'd link to it
  • The Punisher (Frank Castle) first appeared as an antagonist in The Amazing Spider-Man #129, published by Marvel Comics in February 1974. Fans found the murderous vigilante...—same thing as above. I'm thinking something like "The murderous vigilante Punisher... Fans found the Punisher interesting..."
  • Are there any reasons Marvel stopped doing intercompany crossovers for a while? If there are, I think these would be worth mentioning in the background section. I know there were issues that led to an X-Men/Teen Titans crossover being shelved and JLA/Avengers getting stuck in development hell until 2003 but don't know if those are the reasons.
    • I believe it came down to animus between Jim Shooter and DC heads. I suspect Shooter's involvement is the same reason Marvel never did a crossover with Valiant in their heyday. Image wasn't an appealing option for a few reasons. I'm not sure why a Dark Horse or Malibu deal didn't get worked out.
Plot
  • To get back at Archie for cancelling their date...—isn't this article supposed to be written in American English? "Cancelling" is British English; it just has one "l" in American (this isn't a biggie as it's a really common mistake, I just wanted to point this out)
  • No other comments here, pretty well-written and understandable and doesn't go into in-universe details.
Critical reception
  • Everything checks out here
Referencing
Misc.
  • I think you should be consistent with how you call Punisher. Sometimes he's referred to as "the Punisher", other times as just "Punisher"
    • I tried to watch this. I removed instances of the Punisher except where it's part of a title.
  • Image has fair rationale. I'd just add ALT text to the image
    • Alt text added.

JOEBRO64 18:17, 14 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You forget about me, Joe? Argento Surfer (talk) 15:10, 17 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Argento Surfer, of course not! I've been reviewing two other GANs and have been trying to focus on one at a time (this was the last one I picked up). I'll finish this by tomorrow. JOEBRO64 16:34, 17 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
No rush. I'll be offline until next Wednesday. Argento Surfer (talk) 20:19, 17 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I've done the review. Nothing major, just a few blips. This is a really interesting article, I'd heard of the oddball Archie crossovers before but never really knew the story behind 'em. Nice work. JOEBRO64 20:49, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I believe I've addressed everything. Let me know if anything else needs tweaking. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:52, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
You've done a great job with this article dude!★Trekker (talk) 13:54, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Seconded. This is good to go JOEBRO64 14:05, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]