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Good articleBattle of Hama has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
January 12, 2016Good article nomineeListed
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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Battle of Hama/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Catlemur (talk · contribs) 22:31, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Looks interesting.Review comments coming soon.--Catlemur (talk) 22:31, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • "When a servant was sent to buy provisions in the village, he aroused the suspicions of the locals with their strange dress and manner, who notified a local official, Abu Khubzah."

This sentence seems a bit confusing.

  • Perhaps the strengths and casualties of the battle can be incorporated into the infobox.
Hello Catlemur, and thanks for taking the time to review this. I was waiting until you finish the review so I could deal with your suggestions at once. Are you done? Constantine 21:25, 10 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Constantine I did not find any else to point out so you can start.--Catlemur (talk) 21:27, 10 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Catlemur, I think I've dealt with your suggestions, and I've added a few more details on the preliminaries of the battle. Cheers, Constantine 22:53, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Constantine Great job.I gave it GA status.--Catlemur (talk) 14:53, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]