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A few points were raised on my automated reviewer.
  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
  • This article has no or few images.
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.

==My comments== Should A. M. (Morris) Jackaman be wiki-linked? Is he notable enough?

A close up picture of some detail would be nice. Possibly the control tower or showing what is left of a pier (I can see where they were on Google maps). Security and privacy will need to be considered though.

Where is the building today? Obviously it is still where it was built! Does it still fall within the main restricted airport complex, or is it now part of the suburbs? MortimerCat (talk) 06:21, 12 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Substituted at 21:35, 26 June 2016 (UTC)