Talk:Boadicea-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 11:59, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

I'll take this one as well. Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

• One dupe link
• Image checks out
• The 4-inch gun is not converted into metric like the other weapons
• Watch ENGVAR - I see a "maximize"
• Something's wrong with the table - Boadicea doesn't have a builder listed.
• The line about Jutland seems to be out of chronological order. Parsecboy (talk) 12:06, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
  • I was trying to put all the combat-related stuff in the same paragraph, but I agree with you and don't think that it worked. All fixed, see if they work for you.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:01, 2 May 2016 (UTC)