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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot (talk) 18:11, 5 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Well, I've confirmed that there is some content that follows too closely. Among other issues, I've found the following:
The article said:

Breunig was one of 12 drafted rookies who made the team that year - hence the "Dirty Dozen" nickname for the 1975 draft- and helped the Cowboys reach Super Bowl X. The "Dirty Dozen" rookie class, didn't even include linebacker Mike Hegman, who was drafted that year but did not arrive until 1976.

This source says

Drafted in 1975, Breunig was one of 12 rookies who made the team that year – hence the Dirty Dozen nickname – and helped the Cowboys to a Super Bowl....The Dirty Dozen didn't even include 13-year linebacker Mike Hegman, who was drafted that year but did not arrive until the next season.

The article said:

Breunig became a defensive captain and a perfect fit for Landry's complicated "Flex" defense...He finished his career with 466 unassisted tackles, second only to Jordan in Cowboy history.

This source says:

A perfect fit for Landry's complicated "Flex" defense Breunig was defensive captain.... He finished his career with 466 unassisted tackles, second only to Jordan in Cowboy history.

This is definitely too closely paraphrased, but it seems like it should be pretty easy to fix the article. Some of it is already prett thoroughly rewritten, I think, although since sources were not cited I can't check them. I'm closing out the CP listing and reverting to the last version before the tag was placed. The article can certainly be rebuilt. The older versions are still in history and can be mined for facts to include in the rewrite, although sources should be cited to verify and help affirm that there are not copyright concerns. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 21:14, 11 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]