Talk:Brainwashing: The Science of Thought Control/GA1

GA Review

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1. Well written - Prose

• In the "Author" section, spell out THES and OUP to the average reader.
• In the "Comments" section, here are some issues to be resolved.
  • For the first paragraph in the first sentence, please add "its" in between "...Hunter and" and "later usage..."
  • For the second paragraph in the last sentence, change "posits" to "explains" after Taylor.
  • For the third paragraph in the first sentence, please explain what techniques were used in influencing and brainwashing other. In the second sentence of that same paragraph, please list when the Manson Family's murder spree took place?

Manual of style - No issues.

2. Factually accurate and verifiable - No issues.

3. Broad coverage - No issues.

4. Neutral - No issues.

5. Stables - No issues.

6. Images - No issues.

7. Overall - Placing on hold. Minor edits and some clarification needed on the items listed above. It almost makes me want to buy this thing on Amazon.com. Good job. Chris (talk) 14:38, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

Responses to review

1. Done. - spelled out THES and OUP, as suggested above by GA Reviewer.
2. Done. - added "its", as suggested.
3. Done. - changed "posits", to "explains", as suggested.
4. Done. - added info on techniques, as suggested.
5. Done. - added when the murder spree took place, as suggested.

I believe all of the above issues have now been addressed. Thanks very much for the kind words about the article. Cirt (talk) 19:08, 18 September 2009 (UTC)