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Brenda Eichelberger

Early Life

Feminism

Overall, you have a great start to your article! I would just add some more detail as far as her early life and feminist work goes, and adding some extra detail to the into would not hurt either! Also, make sure and correct any grammatical errors that were found in the artice. Good job!! Emilynicole0224 (talk) 00:39, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Grammatical errors and sentence structure problems. Minuscule errors. Did anything in her early life contribute to why she started these organizations? Expand on her accomplishments within both of her organizations. Why did the National Association of Black Feminists fail? What did she do wrong? How did it grow? Why did she start it? Did she start it with someone? Same questions for the National Alliance of Black Feminists. Did her second organization succeed where the first one failed? You're off to a great start, these are questions that will help you o expand more. Is the page more so about her accomplishments within these organizations or about her more specifically? Was she a well known character in the public's eye? KeyiraWalker (talk) 01:57, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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As the other students mentioned, you are off to a great start on this topic! I also suggest adding more details to your sections and correcting the grammatical errors mentioned. I also recommend adding sources to your sections as you go so you don't lose track of the information entered. Two links at the bottom your last section are credible sources. You can cite them while you are adding the information from those sources. Just click "cite" on top of your sandbox and add information about your article and it will be cited for you when you save your changes! Srp027 (talk) 02:26, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]