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GA Review

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Reviewer: Realmaxxver (talk · contribs) 11:52, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be reviewing this w/ some comments below. Realmaxxver (talk) 11:52, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • Instant pass on criteria 5: This article's very stable
  • There are a lot of citations in this one sentence in the CSI & CSCII section: "An edition of the second set, Campbell's Soup Cans II is part of the permanent collection of the Museum of Contemporary Art in Chicago.[136][137][138][139][140][141][142][143][144][145]" If anything can be done to cut down the citations that would be cool, because it looks a little bit like WP:OVERCITE in my opinion.

"It consists of ten prints: Tomato Beef Noodle O',[5] Chicken 'n Dumplings,[9] Vegetarian Vegetable,[10] Clam Chowder,[11] Old fashioned vegetable made with beef stock,[12] Scotch Broth,[13] Cheddar Cheese,[14] Oyster Stew,[15] Golden Mushroom,[16] and Hot Dog Bean.[17]" Realmaxxver (talk) 18:18, 13 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Image review Dead link for Campbell_tomato_soup_ad_1968.jpg— Preceding unsigned comment added by Realmaxxver (talkcontribs) 19:30, November 16, 2023 (UTC)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:24, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I should get working on this real quick. Realmaxxver (talk) 04:39, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Criteria 1 and 4

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Early life

Didn't find any big issues in this section. I made a few changes there, but the prose is good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Realmaxxver (talkcontribs) 06:25, November 27, 2023 (UTC)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:33, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Thanks for taking time with this article.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:19, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]