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Terrible article that reads as a commercial

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Hi, yeah, i just randomly came across this article. I deleted the whole section about how to save money on gas because wtf is that doing on wikipedia? How is the following encyclopedic: "To locate a Carrs/Safeway Fuel Center please visit the link below or to learn more about Carrs/Safeway Fuel Center"? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.54.92.9 (talk) 11:59, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Serious need of editing

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I came across this article tonight and found that it is in desperate need of editing. There are no references or citations, and there were numerous spelling, grammar, and formatting problems, some of which I have already fixed. I added the "Citations Missing" template to the page (if I did this wrong, please let me know), and I removed the Slogan section, as it was not only very poorly written (incomplete sentences, no citations, and outdated information).

The article also borrows heavily from the main Safeway article, especially the section on rebranding. I'm going to try to edit this the best I can on my own, but a little help would be greatly appreciated.--Mr. Corgi (talk) 11:58, 17 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]