Talk:Drive (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 00:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 00:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- –
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
[edit]- Lead: I think production info should stay together (i.e. rearrange it so that the casting info with the writing, directing credits).
- Brian Craston is wikilinked twice in lead
- "...investigating possible, and erroneous, domestic terrorism." How is the domestic terrorism erroneous? I assume you mean that there ultimately was no terrorism?
- No need to wikilink United States, United Kingdom, and Ireland (common words)
- "The episode received 0.70 million viewers..." An episode does not "receive" viewers ;)
- "The episode later won an American Society of Cinematographers award for best regular series" -> "Drive" won the award for Outstanding Achievement in Cinematography – Regular Series from the American Society of Cinematographers.
- Quotation mark problems persist (" versus ')
- Use consistent ref formatting (5 vs 7 for example)
- Ref 7 publisher should be New York (also provide wikilink)
- Unitalicize Critical Myth
I believe that's it. I'll place the review on hold for seven days (though it'd be cool if you get it done by the 28th, (b/c of the Wikicup). Thanks! Ruby 2010/2013 01:10, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I believe I've fixed all the issues. Thank you for reviewing!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:01, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good. Pass for GA. Ruby 2010/2013 04:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)