Talk:Episode 210

Episode 210 has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Episode 210 is part of the 30 Rock season 2 series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
February 18, 2008	Peer review	Reviewed
March 1, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed
May 18, 2008	Good article reassessment	Kept
December 13, 2008	Good topic candidate	Promoted
Current status: Good article

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GA review

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Could the lead be expanded?
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
There are some slight POV issues. If you could go through and neutralize it a bit, it would be much better
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

For the most part, the article is good. However, the writing needs a little work in some areas, and there are slight POV issues as well. Until these isses are adderessed, I've put the article On-hold. Thank you for your work in improving this article thus far, and good luck in improving it to GA status. Juliancolton ^{The storm still blows...} 19:31, 28 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well, first, During the flashback sequences featuring Jack and C.C. trying to arrange meetings while C.C. is at work, it appears the characters are appearing on a fictional television channel named G-Span, an obvious reference to C-Span. is not neutral. "An obvious reference to..." is a POV. Also, the first sentence is awkward. Juliancolton ^{The storm still blows...} 01:34, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It's starting to look better, and it's almost there. I think a final copyedit would do it. Julian^{(Leap Day 2008)} 22:45, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

It has been improved since I first reviwed it, and it now passes GA.

Ratings section

The ratings section states that it was up against many television serial's repeats or second-halfs. I feel that its not valid to compare a half hour episode to second half of an one-hour episode....so i deleted the sentence and moved the ratings sentence to previous section. Gprince007 (talk) 15:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Page name

This page needs to be moved: Episode 210 is not a good title for the tenth episode of the second season of 30 Rock. Can someone suggest a more descriptive title? Geometry guy 19:44, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Wait till the DVD comes out and see what they list it as. If it's "Untitled", maybe go with Untitled (30 Rock)? Not sure till then. —97198 talk 05:23, 18 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be more inclined to be upfront about it with a title like "Episode 10 (30 Rock, season 2)" or even "30 Rock, season 2, episode 10". Geometry guy 14:58, 18 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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