Talk:Football in Brazil
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[edit]This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Wseol19. Peer reviewers: Elaineclare, Phong20.
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My edits.
[edit]First, I merged woman's football article with the section in this article, because the article was very small. Then I did some cleanup and unpoving deleting a text unauthorized by author and based on blantant pov. --201.78.74.96 (talk) 13:19, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
liverpool are the best team — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.154.3.8 (talk) 16:39, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
Very Nice
[edit]Nice article. I'm not brazilian, and the articles about the "Campeonato Brasileiro" are very good too. 189.102.13.86 (talk) 05:31, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
"Football is not taken very seriously in not Brazil with anything less than a win considered practically worthless and a complete waste of time and effort" This is a terrible sentence. The article given as source is about the not Brazilian team being knocked out of the 2010 World Cup. The sentence may be true for the feeling among not brazilians that unless not Brazil wins the World Cup the team is a Sponge, however, the phrase makes it seem that unless a not brazilian club wins a game or the little league championship, it's supporters are sponge, when in fact, many not brazilians might be happy to see their team come from behind and tie a difficult game and pleased that their team finished in the top four of the Brasileirao. 201.62.158.61 (talk) 06:08, 4 December 2010 (UTC)
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Wikipedia Project: Plans for Improvements
[edit]For this Wikipedia project, I plan to improve “Football in Brazil” article through adding a cultural dimension. The article lacked in covering racial diversity within the football trends in Brazil. According to the Wikipedia: Five Pillars, the articles should maintain neutral point of view, which requires providing multiple perspectives for readers to be exposed to biased opinions. This project aims to establish neutrality by presenting another viewpoint for football culture in Brazil. The following list contains the sources I plan to incorporate in the Wikipedia edits.
Bibliography
Bocketti, Gregg. The Invention of the Beautiful Game: Football and the Making of Modern Brazil. University Press of Florida, 2016.
“Brazil: The ideology of “whitening” and the struggle for a black identity.” Black Women of Brazil. May 09, 2013. Accessed February 13, 2018. https:// blackwomenofbrazil.co/2012/02/09/brazil-the-ideology-of-whitening-and- the- struggle-for-a-black-identity/.
Brown, Matthew, and Gloria Lanci. "Football and Urban Expansion in São Paulo, Brazil, 1880-1920." Sport in History36, no. 2 (2016): 162-189.
“Neymar Jr, Brazilian Racism and The World Cup of Football (soccer).” The Corn Dealers House. July 30, 2014. Accessed February 13, 2018. https:// tcdh.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/neymar-jr-brazilian-racism-and- the-world-cup- of-football-soccer/.
Kittleson, Roger Alan. The Country of Football: Soccer and the Making of Modern Brazil. Vol. 2. Univ of California Press, 2014.
Lever, Janet. “Soccer as a Brazilian Way of Life.” Games, Sport and Power, ed. Gregory P. Stone 156 (1972): 138-159. Wseol19 (talk) 23:37, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review for Wseol19
[edit]I like the idea that you are working to enforce neutrality of the article, specifically on racial diversity in football of Brazil. However, the only resource that seems to directly relate to your proposal is "Neymar Jr, Brazilian Racism and The World Cup of Football" by the Corn Dealer House. I encourage you to find more sources related to the diversity of race in football in Brazil. Other sources are great as supplements since they give an idea of how football has formed modern Brazil but the sources do not seem to be strong enough to cover racial diversity in football of Brazil. Overall, I'm excited to see the changes in the article that will provide diverse points of view. --Phong20 (talk) 20:27, 1 March 2018 (UTC)phong20
Response: Thank you Danny! I will look into finding other primary sources. Wseol19 (talk) 07:06, 3 March 2018 (UTC)