Talk:Fresh Bones
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:02, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 05:02, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
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- It is broad in its coverage.
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- It is stable.
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- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Comments
[edit]- "After Private Jack McAlpin crashes his car into a tree after two separate hallucinatory incidents, a voodoo symbol drawn on it." Fragmented sentence
- "In North Carolina, an agitated United States Marine Corps private, Jack McAlpin, after several hallucinatory episodes, drives his car into a tree and is apparently killed." Kind of a disjointed sentence. Maybe change to "In North Carolina, an agitated United States Marine Corps private named Jack McAlpin experiences several hallucinatory episodes and drives his car into a tree; he is apparently killed."
- "...but sees blood coming out of his ham" Just wanted to make sure this was written correctly; his ham? Yikes!
- "Scully cuts herself on the hand..." -> Scully cuts her hand
- Who is Dunham? Who introduce him out of nowhere (I immediately thought of my Dunham (-: )
- Wikilink Daniel Benzali in production section
- "While he didn't look like a military man, the producers felt he had the quality they were looking for in the role." The first part is subjective (who says he didn't look like a military man?)
- "The sequence where a man came out of Scully's hand and strangled her came about by using a mechanical hand which the actor stuffed his gelatine covered fingers through". What male actor? I thought we were talking about Scully (Gillian Anderson)?
- What is a sump pump? Is there a relevant wikilink?
- 10.8 or 10.9 million households?
- "The episode was the highest rated episode of the first two seasons" -> "Fresh Bones" was the highest rated episode of the first two seasons
- "In their book, X-Treme possibility, authors Keith Topping and Paul Cornell ..." Should X-Treme possibility be italicized? And is possibility meant to not be capitalized?
- ✗ Not done Ruby 2010/2013 19:08, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- "...gave the episode a B- and a more mixed reviewing..." reviewing -> review
- The AV Club quote has a " ' issue
On hold for seven days while above comments get addressed. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 03:50, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I believe I've fixed all the issues!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:09, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, whoops, sorry, missed that one. Now, I believe they're all fixed. Also, side note: I'd love an X-Files/Fringe cross-over... somehow.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:15, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- Vaguely related, there is a wealth of X-Files/Twin Peaks crossover fan fiction out there. GRAPPLE X 22:08, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- There have also been a number of Twin Peaks and X-Files references in various Fringe episodes (but it'd be cool if Mulder and Scully actually stopped by!) Anyways, article looks good. Passing for GA. Nice work, Ruby 2010/2013 04:24, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Well, there was that excellent 30 Days of Night/X-Files graphic novel, so I suppose anything is possible. Thanks for reviewing!--Gen. Quon (talk) 05:00, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- There have also been a number of Twin Peaks and X-Files references in various Fringe episodes (but it'd be cool if Mulder and Scully actually stopped by!) Anyways, article looks good. Passing for GA. Nice work, Ruby 2010/2013 04:24, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Vaguely related, there is a wealth of X-Files/Twin Peaks crossover fan fiction out there. GRAPPLE X 22:08, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, whoops, sorry, missed that one. Now, I believe they're all fixed. Also, side note: I'd love an X-Files/Fringe cross-over... somehow.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:15, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
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