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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General


Info box
  • Genres should be alphabetical
Lead
  • while it was produced by both along with → and it was produced in collaboration with
  • on a show → at a show
  • who deemed it an album standout, → on of whom deemed it as a standout song on the album, [I doubt every critic said it was a standout]
  • an album standout, and was labelled a masterpiece whose melodic beat and sound were described as "cinematic". → an album standout. It was described as being a masterpiece, and its melodic beat and sound were defined as "cinematic".
  • on the Billboard Hot 100, → on the United States' Billboard Hot 100,
  • Put how many her tally was with number 2 songs.
  • I'd say that she performed it on Wetten Dass too, rather than just her tours.

More to follow

All  Done. Jorn talk 00:19, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Background
  • 1997 was a quiet year for Madonna. → This is unbelievably bias and not encyclopaedic. This needs to be removed.
  • After she gave birth to her daughter, Lourdes, the previous year, she enrolled in → After Madonna gave birth to her daughter Lourdes, in 1997, she enrolled in
  • These incidents inspired Madonna a lot, as she began introspecting herself. → The singer was inspired by these activities, as she began introspecting herself.
  • The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks.
  • A bad quality snipped of the track was leaked → A low quality snippet of "Frozen" was leaked
All  Done
Composition
  • According to the sheet music from Alfred Publishing, → Redundant info
  • F3 is lower than Ab3 (G#3), so not sure what's going on here?
  • subtexts have been noticed. → Like?
All  Done
Plagiarism case
  • The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks.
 Done
Music video
  • Madonna thought that there is a lot of magical, mystical powers in a desert and is a magical place to be. → Madonna thought that there are a lot of magical, mystical powers in the desert and that it is a magical place to be.
  • The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks. Besides, the quote box on the left is disrupting the block quote, as it just looks like a normal paragraph. Having a quote box, a picture or an audio file on the left hand side next to a block quote never works, as it doesn't allow for the block quote to be indented. I would remove the quote box and just make it normal prose.
All  Done
Certifications
  • I'd update the format of the box to one like this. It's a lot more clear.
 Done
References
  • There is a red link on the "Vorrath, Armin (2011). Eine außersinnliche Odyssee zu Madonna. Books on Demand."
 Done
Status

On hold  — AARONTALK 11:50, 9 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Jorn talk 21:13, 10 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Passing.  — AARONTALK 10:07, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.