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In light of his tragic death, I came to this page to read more about his life. I must say that this is no tribute. The prose is poor. Just about every sentence begins with the "He" pronoun. He did this he did that. There is also a horrendous amount of tautology that insults the reader. For instance the intro begins he was a professional footballer, next sentence he was a defender; third line, he played for Liverpool. Good grief, is this version copy/paste from the simple English Wikipedia site.

There is no narrative flow or any attempt for informative engagement with the reader. This article needs a major rewrite by those who use English as their first language.

Wiki is here for all to edit - feel free to make the necessary changes--Egghead06 (talk) 11:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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