Talk:German destroyer Z33
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:53, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:53, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
Lead
- There is several uses of "damaged", including two in the same sentence. Consider paraphrasing some of these.
- Good idea.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
Modifications
- "they were replaced by weapons from the taken from the wreck of the heavy cruiser Lützow": the first "from the" needs to be deleted
- The section refers to 15 cm; 3.7 cm; 2 cm: shouldn't there be dashes in there for consistency with previous usage where the "centimetre" is recited in full?
- No, the MOS says a non-breaking space between abbreviated measurements, not a dash.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
Service history
- link Lützow (and shouldn't it be the Lützow?
- Linked in the Modifications section. You can use "the ship", but you need to be consistent and I generally don't use it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
- Whoops, apologies, I overlooked that. Zawed (talk) 08:49, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
- Linked in the Modifications section. You can use "the ship", but you need to be consistent and I generally don't use it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
Other stuff
- Image tags check OK
- No dab links
- No dupe links
- No external links so no issues there
Overall, minimal issues and those that are there should be straightforward to address. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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- All good, passing as GA now. Zawed (talk) 08:49, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
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