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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Lead
  • Minor edit: "has perform" >> "has performed"
Background
  • Minor edit: "conspired" >> "worked" (it's a song, not a terrorist plan)
  • Minor edit: "Herbert approbated the particular tune the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him." >> "Herbert named the particular tune as the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him."
Composition
Charts
  • Write "South Korea GAON International Chart" as title instead of "스트리밍 순위집계 : 온라인 음원 스트리밍 수" and add on the reference the week on which the song appeared, since the main link http://gaonchart.co.kr/main/section/online/streaming/list.gaon returns only the latest chart, thus rendering unverifiable the position.
  • The (subscrition required) tag must be added to the "US Hot Dance/Electronic Digital Songs" chart position reference.

Nothing else. 'til the charts are fixed, i'll put it on hold. —Hahc21 19:19, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe everything is all in order. :) —DAP388 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Mmm well, on the Gaon chart i was referring to this:
  • "South Korea GAON International Chart" (in Korean). Korea Music Content Industry Association. To properly see the chart position, select 2011 and 2011.05.22~2011.05.28. Retrieved June 20, 2012.
This way, anyone can verify the charts. And change the link to http://www.gaonchart.co.kr/main/section/online/streaming/list.gaon?nationGbn=E
I'll do it myself.

Well, since eveything has been fixed. I'll pass the article. —Hahc21 20:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Hahc21 20:10, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]