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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 16:49, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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@Lee Vilenski:, Hélio's trial on those charges resulted in him missing a race in the 2009 season, and his replacement for that race, Will Power, still drives for Team Penske to this day. I believe that fits the "historical event" aspect of WP:CRIME. The article can definitely bridge those events together much better, as it doesn't mention him missing said race until the next section. GhostOfDanGurney (talk) 18:20, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I was specifically talking about it being mentioned in the lede. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 18:22, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, okay. :] GhostOfDanGurney (talk) 18:23, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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