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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:51, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
Minor nitpicks:
- "The boats
hadcould dive" - there is a rounding issue between both the power output conversions in the infobox and body
- even though you have linked Dardanelles campaign in the lead, you could link Dardanelles in the body
- It's a pretty short article.
- do we know what A-H destroyer was sighted?
- Sadly no.
- suggest "B8 reported spotting a periscope and a miss by a torpedo" as it appears this wasn't right?
- Good idea.
- you could drop the British from "British H-class submarines"
That's all I could find to quibble about, nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:35, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, mate.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:49, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:16, 30 September 2019 (UTC)