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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:17, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]


This article is in pretty good shape.

  • In the lead, which battle?
  • The displacement in the text and infobox doesn't match.
  • link shp in text
  • link Port and starboard
  • probably worth specifying that the secondary guns were in single mounts
  • After introducing BS as an abbreviation, suggest referring to 1st BS and subsequent mentions of BS
  • link Home Fleet at first mention
  • suggest linking mobilisation
  • link dreadnought at sixteen dreadnoughts
  • 1900 should be 19:00
  • The sentence beginning During the battle has a repetition of "during the battle"
  • suggest and was refitted to suit her new role
  • suggest and she returned to Devonport where she was again listed for disposal
  • images are all appropriately licensed and captioned.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:33, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]