Talk:HONR Network
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Language needs to be more neutral
[edit]The language in this article needs to be neutralized, it's more appropriate for a newspaper article or something.
For example:
- "it has been instrumental in bringing about major policy changes" - this is an opinion, not supported by a source
- "Still grieving, Noah’s mother, Lenny’s ex-wife, Veronique de la Rosa and her brother, attorney Alexis Haller spoke out in the media" - their emotions need not be brought up to get the point across
- "This solidified the Pozner’s complicity in the minds of conspiracy theorists and their followers" - how do we know what is in their minds?
- "Pozner decided that if he couldn’t appeal to InfoWars to stop spreading lies and inciting hatred against his family" - this one's obvious
- etc.
Wikipedia entries are not meant to stir up readers' emotions, they are meant to inform with only the facts. ... discospinster talk 01:46, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
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