Talk:Henry Higgins Boiled Bagels/GA1
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Nominator: Another Believer (talk · contribs) 14:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing! Happy to address any concerns you may have. ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
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Stable?[edit]
Yes. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Image check[edit]
Both images have good copyright and are appropriate in the article. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Copyvio?[edit]
Earwig shows a 42.2% due to the quote being exactly worded like in the source but I think it should be fine. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
MoS[edit]
Lead[edit]
looks good. Cos (X + Z) 22:27, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Layout[edit]
- move portal bar to in between the navboxes and the categories
Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Words to watch[edit]
looks good Cos (X + Z) 18:32, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Source check[edit]
- all citations are styled good
- Thanks ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Grammar and OR[edit]
Description[edit]
Among boiled bagel varieties are "everything", onion, and pumpernickel.
remove quotation marksDone ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:41, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
History[edit]
such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002
remove as not mentioned- I am not sure what you mean here. This says, "This Jewish community center will host a Hanukkah food pop-up from 11 a.m. to 2 p.m. on Sunday, December 18. Vendors will include kosher brewery Leikam Brewing, Henry Higgins Bagels, Washington marinara business ManJa Creations, and new Jewish deli Jacob & Sons, among others." ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Reception[edit]
- looks good
- Thanks ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)