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Good articleHomesick (Dua Lipa song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starHomesick (Dua Lipa song) is part of the Dua Lipa (album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 12, 2020Good article nomineeListed
September 5, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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It will be exciting to review one of your articles again! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • It says it's the seventh single on the lead, but the eighth on the Dua Lipa album. Which one is it?
  • Thats my mistake, thanks for checking that. The song "New Love" was being discussed as a promotional single or single and I forgot to update it once the discussion was closed. Its the eighth. LOVI33 15:03, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "it was serviced to" → "it was sent to"
  • "with lyrics discussing being away from loved ones." → "with its lyrics addressing being away from loved ones."
  • "but many also feeling as though it was forced." → "but also feeling it was forced."

 Done

Writing and production

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  • "everything and wanting" → "everything, and wanting"
  • "and she found it" → "and found it"
  • "They began recording everything, humming and making up melodies." → "They began recording the song, humming and making up melodies."
  • "as she though it" → "as she thought it"

 Done

Music and lyrics

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  • Looks good!

Release and promotion

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 Not done, per above. LOVI33 15:05, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • "labelled the song "delicate"" → "labelled the song as "delicate""
  • "Homesick" "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." → "Homesick" as a "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." track."

 Done

Track listings

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  • Looks good!

Credits and personnel

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  • Looks all good!

Charts

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  • Looks good!

Certifications

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  • Looks good!

Release history

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  • Looks good!

References

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  • [1] looks great at 11.5%

Final comments and verdict

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I am putting this  On hold until the issues are fixed. Great job on this article! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:47, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Ultimate Boss, thanks for reviewing this article! I have addressed all your comments above, is there anything else I can do? LOVI33 15:10, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
LOVI33, Everything looks great! I am going to  Pass this! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:26, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

this is a piano song

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I can do a Google search on what genre this song is, and it will say "pop" even though this is a piano song. Where does Google get that type of information from? AKK700 19:58, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Is homesick promo single?

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https://dualipa.fandom.com/wiki/Dua_Lipa_(album) in here Homesick is regarded as normal single not a promo single. is Homesick really promo single? Arismauve (talk) 10:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]