Talk:Hurricane Fausto (2002)/GA1

GA Review

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Although this has never benn nominate before I am nominating this for GA. Leave Message ,Yellow Evan home ,Sandbox Happy Verdirins day 15:50, 11 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I failed this. The writing is weak (and rather similar to the TCR at parts, which should be avoided). The lede is too short. The article doesn't use any discussions, which is problematic. The units are weird at the end of the 2nd paragraph, and some important distances are missing. Any more info on the reformation? This sentence is weird - "Contrary to popular belief, the temperature anomaly had nothing to do with the El Niño that was ongoing at the time." Any info on waves impacting Mexico or California? Most major hurricanes do that. I'm failing it (rather than putting it on hold) since aside from there being work do to, the article hasn't been touched (for the most part) since October 9th. It seems the article has been forgotten about. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:20, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]