Talk:Ilara-Ogudo Yewa

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Copy editing but article still needs work

Copy editing on several aspects of this article, see list below. However, the article still needs work, especially by editors knowledgeable with the local culture.

General copyediting.
Removed link to an empty website on the information box.
Used Ketu instead of Ketou in all mentions, for consistency.
Changed “ILE-IFE” to Ife and linked to article.
Simplified name of Yoruba deity to just “Oduduwa” in every mention and linked to article.
Link to Yoruba people added in text.
Removed repetition for clarity in the History section.
Removed this section from history “Oduduwa and the line of Alaketu” as it was just a copy paste from the Oduduwa article.
Is Sopasan the same as Alaketu?
What is “Ose Sango and Edun Aara”?
Removed isolated, incomprehensible mentions of: "Babalase the Native Doctor" and "Iji Agananku the great warrior".
Moved youtube link to external links section.
Removed “Publisher” as irrelevant.
Removed empty sections.
Removed Landmarks/Compounds section, since it did not add to the quality of the article.
Multiple edits for correctness, clarity and non-encyclopedic language in the “Colonial years” section.
Removed “Geography” section as it was mainly a repetition of the introduction.
Removed some non-english phrases that did not have translation or explanation.
Removed too much detail from description of local dishes.
Fixed words capitalized for no reason (e.g. Tomatoes, Onions).

Alan Islas (talk) 22:59, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]