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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 21:22, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Dabs and external links look good (no action required)
  • The lead needs to be expanded a little bit to more fittingly reflect the article. As is it's unhelpfully short.
    • Not a very long article, but I've added some.
  • "The prototype was completed by August 1949, but an incident involving the rival swept-wing Tupolev Tu-82 led to delays ..." describe this incident in a little detail.
    • Done.
  • There should be a sourced explanation of the reason some of the specifications are missing, even if it's just a lack of available records or unclassified material.
    • Erroneous announcement.
  • Format the references consistently.
    • Done.
Will check back soon. —Ed!(talk) 21:28, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:09, 10 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]