Talk:Ilyushin Il-32/GA1
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Reviewer: Grondemar (talk · contribs) 00:29, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
This is a very simple article, with therefore very little to review. I do have a couple of concerns regarding the need for citations and the infobox image:
- Opening sentence: "The Ilyushin Il-32 was a Soviet heavy military glider developed after World War II to deliver 7,000 kg (15,000 lb) of cargo, including 60 troops or a 122 mm (4.8 in) cannon with its prime mover, ammunition and crew." I know the 60 troops are mentioned in the specifications, but nowhere else in the article is the cannon mentioned. It should be discussed in the body, with a citation.
- The specifications need a citation.
- The licensing of the image File:Il32-i.jpg needs to be improved; it certainly wasn't taken in 2004. The file either needs to be shown to be PD, or a fair-use rationale needs to be provided.
- Note that I have tagged the image for deletion at Commons, but I have saved a copy locally to be re-uploaded at en.wp with a FUR if necessary. –Grondemar 00:59, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
- All done, image transferred to en.wiki.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:23, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
- Note that I have tagged the image for deletion at Commons, but I have saved a copy locally to be re-uploaded at en.wp with a FUR if necessary. –Grondemar 00:59, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- This review is placed
on holdfor a minimum of seven days pending resolution of the above concerns.
- This review is placed
- Pass/Fail:
Thanks. –Grondemar 00:50, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing my concerns above. I will now
pass this article as a Good Article. Congratulations! –Grondemar 23:56, 26 December 2011 (UTC)