Talk:Inside Out (Britney Spears song)/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 19:42, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
- General formatting
- One external link changes its domain.
- I would recommend applying flatlists, which has been adopted by the infobox for singles.
- Can you find a picture to help dress up the article? Maybe a picture of Spears performing the song, one of the songwriters, etc.
- I suggest writing out the dates in the citations. I believe that's an FAC preference, so it's a good practice to get into.
- Introduction
- Us Britney fans know that In the Zone and Circus are her earlier albums, but could you add that in for readers that may not be as familiar with her work?
- Background
- Same with Blackout, I'd suggest noting that it's one of her previous records.
- Reception
- In the link you provide for the South Korean chart, there's a pop-up in Korean that I can't seem to get around to verify the information. Can you find another link please?
That should do it. Just a couple small tweaks and corrections and we'll be ready for a promotion. WikiRedactor (talk) 20:00, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
- All
Done. Thanks for the review. Jorn talk 12:06, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
- Passing, good work! WikiRedactor (talk) 16:58, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
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