Talk:Jacob Svetoslav/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Lampman (talk) 07:12, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
This seems fine, there are just a few minor issues:
- There should be no "?" in dates, see Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(dates_and_numbers)#Longer_periods
- The word "eminent" in the lead seems a bit POV, "prominent" would probably be better.
- The heading "Biography" is redundant - this is all his biography.
- The term "despot" needs to be wikilinked in the main text, but should probably also be briefly explained.
- The Бакалов book can't be found by following the ISBN link.
- The bibliography should be alphabetical (I wouldn't know how to do that...) Lampman (talk) 12:39, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! I have introduced all changes that you suggested. I am aware of the issue with the Бакалов ISBN, I suspect this is because the source is an electronic (CD-based) encyclopedia which libraries normally would not have hold of. Should I remove the ISBN or retain it? Best, Todor→Bozhinov
- Better to keep it if it's actually correct. Perhaps use the "format=" parameter to explain that it's an electronic resource. Thanks for your work! Lampman (talk) 04:59, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
- Done. Thank you for your review! All the best, Todor→Bozhinov 06:11, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
- Better to keep it if it's actually correct. Perhaps use the "format=" parameter to explain that it's an electronic resource. Thanks for your work! Lampman (talk) 04:59, 6 April 2010 (UTC)