Talk:Japanese destroyer Hatsuume
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
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- Bold Xin Yang
- Construction and service
- Date stricken from Japanese service varies between the infobox and the prose.
- "The ship was launched on 25 April 1945 and completed on 18 June.[6] The destroyer was assigned to the 11th Destroyer Squadron of the Combined Fleet that same day for working up. Hatsuume was damaged when she struck a naval mine near Maizuru six days later that killed four crewmen" - This implies that the mine incident was on 24 June, but Nevitt provides a date of 26 June.
- Good catch.
- Nevitt suggests that it was attacked by aircraft on July 30. Do any of the other sources mention this?
- No, the whole thing is odd because Enoki also hit a mine on 26 June, so why would Hatsuume be there more than a month later, especially if her mine damage was still unrepaired.
- References
- The Dodson & Cant and Jentschure, Jung & Mickel references are flagging that they contain deprecated parameters. Not a big deal, but might as well clean it up since that parameter has been deprecated.
- Other
- Maybe add to Category:Destroyers of the Republic of China Navy?
Image licensing looks correct (not a licensing expert), and spot checked all of the citations I could. Looks good, there's not much to say on this one, gonna place it on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 17:23, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking this over. I'll be fixing those damn references from now until eternity!
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