Talk:Joey Hamilton/GA1
GA Review
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From a look through this article, I'll have to fail it. It's not a bad article, it just needs a lot of work done yet, it's not really complete. For example:
- Lead needs to be more than one sentence.
- Where'd he attend high school? Did he play other sports?
- College info is pretty good, though adding in more detail would help.
- What minor league teas did he play for in the Padres' farm system?
- There is nothing on 1995-1998. He was a starter those seasons, and to have nothing makes for a very incomplete article. (this alone would be GA-fail-worthy)
- The Toronto/Cincy sections aren't as bad, but again, more expansion.
- Basically, try and expand everything. It's a nice start but not a complete work.
The good thing about recent baseball pitchers is that there are a LOT of sources at your disposal. Even going through google news and adding things in can get you a 20kb+ article in no time. I could certainly help you out if you'd like, though common names make google searching a bit harder. Wizardman 19:29, 16 May 2009 (UTC)