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Final Paragraph rewriting

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Hello,

I was doing Copyedits and noticed that the final paragraph was talking about his relation with Polish scientists, this seems to be a boast as the editor mentions and I quote "despite Poland's membership in the US-hostile Warsaw Pact". This feels non impartial, However due to me being a new account I do not know how to fix it

Should this be fixed

Thanks Posaidonman Posaidonman (talk) 19:48, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's a minor issue, really; "US-hostile" could perhaps be removed, unless it's relevant context for younger readers (who might not immediately recall what the Warsaw Pact was). Unfortunately, several of the copyedits introduced language errors, awkward phrasing, or factual errors in the text, so they have been reverted. --bonadea contributions talk 13:35, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]