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GA Review

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Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 23:59, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I will be reviewing this article within the next couple of hours. Please ping me here if you have any questions or concerns. Thanks! Z1720 (talk) 23:59, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Some comments to be resolved before this can be promoted:

  • "Oslin released This Woman (1988) and Love in a Small Town (1990), which became successful. The albums spawned hit singles including "Hold Me," "Hey Bobby" and "Come Next Monday."" -> Oslin released This Woman (1988) and Love in a Small Town (1990), which spawned hit singles including "Hold Me," "Hey Bobby" and "Come Next Monday." The album's success is assumed if there were many hit singles and "they were successful" is perhaps too general.
  • "the studio effort" What is a studio effort? I suggest rephrasing.
  • The lede says, "Oslin was raised mostly in Houston, Texas by her widowed mother." But the body says, " The family moved to Mobile, Alabama following her father's death, which is where Oslin spent her childhood. When she was a teenager, her mother moved her family to Houston, Texas, where she would eventually graduate from high school." These don't feel like they match.

Those are all my comments. Once these are addressed, please ping me and I will look at this again. Z1720 (talk) 00:50, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]