Talk:Kaine (manga)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:29, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Kaine die kuro to live shiro no nōnaimayaku busshitsu" presumably this translates into more than just Kaine...?
" Hakusensha late" for us non-experts, possibly add "publishing company" in front of Hakusensha?
"Anime and Manga portal" -> "Anime and Manga portal"
" but a high induced " maybe link "high" here.
Not convinced we need a link to Los Angeles.
"Its sequel short story" we've lost what "Its" is by now...
"manga artist Kaori Yuki " WP:SEAOFBLUE.
"rock music.[9][1][10] " refs in numerical order.
" remarked upon.[10][11][9]" and "a manga artist.[10][11][9]" same.
Ref 10, spaced hyphen should be spaced en-dash.

That's all, nothing fundamental and an enjoyable read. I'll put it on hold while we address the trivialities above. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 10:22, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking the time to review! :) I'm quite happy to hear that you found it an enjoyable read. I certainly recommend the source material if you're into thriller manga. I believe I have addressed your concerns with the exception of the portal, because I'm not exactly sure what's going on with the portals right now in a technical sense. I believe it has something to do with the infobox template, but templates are a bit beyond me, I'm afraid! Best wishes, Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 02:17, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, I fixed a dab, but now passing. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:28, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you!! :) Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 23:43, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]