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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

1
1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
3
3.a Y

3.b Y
4
4.a Y
5
5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:
Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.

@KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:28, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:26, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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