Talk:Kelly Kelly/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"She made her debut on the first episode of the weekly television program, June 13, 2006," modify a bit, perhaps 'of the weekly television program on June..'
- Done. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"On the October 29 episode of Raw, Kelly won a battle royal, to earn a match" comma after royal not needed
- Done. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"She made her debut on the April 30 episode of SmackDown," comma not needed
- Done. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"She went on to feud with Lay-Cool, gaining and ally in Tiffany." an ally
- Done. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The WWE external link is a 404, looks like they again modified all their roster links on the site.
- Fixed url. NiciVampireHeart 12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once those issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:16, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

No problem. Everything looks good now, so article passes as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:32, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]