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Former good article nomineeLet Me Reintroduce Myself was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 2, 2023Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Let Me Reintroduce Myself/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This will run over the course of two days --K. Peake 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "and the song's producer," → "and the sole producer,"
  • "to a new studio album" would it be more appropriate to write this or "to an upcoming studio album"?
  • Where is the older artist part sourced properly?
  • "and Stefani's brother" → "and Gwen's brother" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
  • Remove on the track after the instrumentation since this is implied
  • "A departure from Stefani's" → "A departure from Gwen Stefani's" because she was not the last Stefani mentioned
  • The one lyric and artwork sentence is not notable for the lead
  • "and comparing it favorably to" → "and making favorable comparisons to"
  • These three paragraphs are too small on their own, so merge the lead into two paras
  • "An accompanying music video to the song was" → "An accompanying music video was" with the wikilink
  • Remove the introduction to Philip Andelman since this is not required in the lead
  • "at a music video shoot." → "at a video shoot." to avoid using the term music video twice
  • "of the song's digital release," → "of the digital release,"

Background and release

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  • Stefani doubting if her fans would do the same does not seem to be the point she is making in the quote
  • The source does not say that it was a Zoom conference where they met virtually
  • Pipe The Voice to The Voice (American TV series)
  • Either pipe Me Too movement to MeToo Movement or stylize it as that instead
  • "and described it her "a way of saying I’m" → "and described it as "a way of saying I'm"
  • Img looks good!
  • Wikilink music video
  • "also drew a comparison to her "Hollaback Girl" look," → "also drew a comparison to "Hollaback Girl"," since you have already specified this is about the style
  • "It serves as her first non-festive single release" → "It served as Stefani's first non-festive single"
  • Remove comma after third studio album
  • "after the announcement of her engagement to" → "after her engagement to" because no announcement is mentioned by the source
  • Wikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Remove usage of "the" before Universal Music Group since that's not how it is stylized

Composition and lyrics

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  • Img looks good!
  • The country part is not sourced, even though duets themselves are
  • Where is the Latin part sourced?
  • Wikilink as The Orange County Register instead
  • "said it was a" → "said it is a"
  • "claimed that the song helped" → "assured it helped"
  • "of Stefani’s days" → "of Stefani's days"
  • "Stefani's brother, Eric Stefani, contributes" → "Gwen's brother Eric Stefani contributes" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
  • "the song is about Stefani's" → "the song is about Gwen Stefani's" per above
  • "Ross wanted to help" → "Golan wanted to help"
  • "additionally references her 2005 single "Hollaback Girl"" → "additionally references "Hollaback Girl"" since it has already been introduced
  • "in the lyric:" → "with the lines"

Critical reception

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  • "and compared it to "her days" → "and compared it to Stefani's "days"
  • ""Although it’s been a" → ""Although it's been a"
  • "Paper likened the song" → "The staff of Paper likened the song"
  • "at the right time."" → "at the right time"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • Italicise Vulture.com and wikilink to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "to be clunky but overall" → "to be clunky, but overall"

Chart performance

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  • "In the US," → "In the United States,"
  • "at number 3." → "at number three." per MOS:NUM
  • "It later reached at peak" → "The song later reached at peak"
  • Remove the ranking of the UK Singles Chart since that is not notable here
  • "It debuted at" → "The song debuted at"
  • Mention a couple or so more European airplay or digital charts per the lead

Music video

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  • Wikilink music video on the img text
  • "The accompanying music video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" was" → "The accompanying music video was"
  • "released on January 1, 2021 to Stefani's YouTube channel." → "released to Stefani's YouTube channel on January 1, 2021."
  • Pipe Today to Today (American TV program)
  • "The video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" begins with" → "The video begins with"
  • Remove the comma after solo music video
  • "The "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" video then transitions" → "The scene then transitions"
  • Remove the comma after debut studio solo album
  • Remove pipe on Zoom
  • "of the song itself" and called it" → "of the song itself", and called it"
  • Wikilink Entertainment Tonight

Live performances

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  • "on December 7, 2020 for a" → "on December 7, 2020, for a"
  • Remove pipe on Today
  • "Her performance on The Tonight Show was also" → "The third performance was also"

Track listing

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Release history

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  • Good

References

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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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Thank you for the review! I will be getting to this shortly. Carbrera (talk) 23:15, 4 January 2023 (UTC).[reply]