Talk:Llegar a Ti (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:58, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Almost there; just a few copy changes. Nothing truly missing. 7-day hold to Magiciandude. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:09, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

Lead

• The song led to Velasquez receiving several accolades including a Latin Grammy nomination for Best Female Pop Vocal Performance in 2000. Consider a comma after "accolades"

Background

• Since signing on to Myrrh Records in 1995, Velasquez has achieved — consider "had", as this should be past tense
• Hyphenate "five-disc"; comma after Sony Discos
• Enrique Fernandez of the Sun-Sentinel noted that the track "can be read two ways: love of a human or of a higher entity." Still a sentence fragment, so period outside the quotation.

Promotion

• "Llegar a Ti" was nominated Pop Song of the Year at the 13th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards, but ultimately lost to "A Puro Dolor" by Son by Four. Drop the comma: see User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences for why. There is just one subject for both halves of the sentence, thus no comma.

Other items

• References are archived.
• Earwig turns up no passages of concern.
• There is a fair-use album cover with appropriate rationale. Tables are captioned. There is alt text on the image!

Hey thanks for the review @Sammi Brie:! I believe I addressed everything you brought up. Erick (talk) 15:23, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

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