Talk:Marceau-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great work so far on this article. I have a few comments:

100-guns?
- Fixed
when talking about the weight of guns, could you include the bore as well?
- That's an issue - Ropp doesn't give the caliber of the French guns, just their weight, and since they were only experimental, they don't turn up in sources like Friedman. I can provide numbers for the Italian guns, but I don't know that the French were the same. I'd think readers would assume so, and I don't want to lead them to draw false conclusions
suggest linking t in the body when converting displacement
- Done
range of engines not in the infobox
- Fixed
range of boilers not in the infobox
- Fixed
suggest adding the calibre of the secondary guns in the body
- Done
same comments about the TTs as the Neptune review
- Fixed
no range for cruising?
- Not in the sources
the bottom end of the belt range is slightly different between the infobox and body
- Fixed
in the even of damage
- Good eye
"64 mm (2.5 in) thick gun shields"
- Done
"top-heavy superstructures and masts cut down" in the lead needs to be reflected in the body
- Done
specify water-tube boilers in the modernization to reflect the lead
- Done
File:Neptune on Penfeld-Edmond Chagot mg 8229b.jpeg needs licensing for the actual painting, per the 2D reproduction rules
- Updated per the Neptune GA review

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:59, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 22:07, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]