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Here is a list of improvements you can make to this article Ryan Vesey Review me! 03:47, 17 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Take a look at MOS:LEAD and use that to reformat the lead section. The lead section should summarize the content of the article.

Awards/Honors

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  • I'm certain that more awards and honors can be found.
  • These should be in chronological order.
  • Now that I think of it, Awards and honors may be a better title .
  • Why did she receive these awards?
  • Can the sentences be rewritten? Something like "she became a Guggenheim Fellow in 2011" then give a reason why. Who presents her with the honor?

Education

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  • Move the education section to before Awards/Honors
  • What are the dates that she received her MFA and BFA?
  • Again, these should be in chronological order with BFA coming before MFA
  • Is there anything interesting about her education that can be added? Did she do anything important while in school?

Works

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I'll get to this later

References

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  • Move any possible external links to inline.
  • Create titles for the references, rather than bare urls. This can be done by typing [URL.com TITLE OF URL]

Miscellaneous

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  • An infobox can be created for this article. Try {{Infobox person}} {{Infobox artist}} may work too.
  • Some type of a life section should be created. When was she born? Information about her marriage can be moved there.
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